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Adventures: reopened!!!! New episode: Gir the Mighty!
« on: June 01, 2004, 01:15:20 pm »

these stories  are going to be like a t.v. show with short episodes


1.billiondy buxx


H*R:hey stwon bah check out my new game!

s.b.:woah how did you afford this?

H*R: oh that cwedit cawd agency mailed me again and said i had a billliondymillion buxx!

S.b.:*chuckle* oh.....really *heh-heh*pfft

H*R:you should see somebody about that cough!

s.b.:whatever....



more episodes coming soon!


tell me if it was good or bad
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Re: the adventures of H*R and strongbad,please rev
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2004, 02:43:54 pm »

sorry for double posting...NEW episode!


2.mock-jail


sb walks by homestar is in an out door jail cell

s.b.:why are you in that box homestar you idiot

H*R:remember that video game i bought?

s.b.:yeah that was funny

H*R:what?

s.b.: oh ummm..... nothing

H*R: well the police came to my house and told me i used a hot check to buy it but if you ask me it didn't look good at all

s.b. hits his forehead and says:you're such an idiot


s.b.:see you loser  man i'm gonna go burn something


END!
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Re: the adventures of H*R and strongbad,new episod
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2004, 03:02:27 pm »

these are good man keep 'em coming Grin
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Re: the adventures of H*R and strongbad,new episod
« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2004, 08:17:07 am »

new episode



3 and one fourth:cyberspace

sb:gotta check my e-maill...

H*R: stwon bah check out this can of mewonade i found

homestar spills his can of melonade on s.b.'s computer

s.b.:you idiot look what you did!

H*R: whoah what's happening

homsar:I goot antz zen my tooth pastee!

s.b.:were getting sucked into cyberspace

H*R:and homsaw is coming with us!

s.b.:nooooooo not that guy!


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part 2 coming soon!
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Re: the adventures of H*R and strongbad,newer epis
« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2004, 02:39:44 pm »


new 'sode

3 and a half.cyberspace prt.2

s.b.:who's that guy he looks like 20x6

megaman.exe:who are you?

H*R:I'm the homstarrunner and some folks say i'm a-

s.b. mocking homestar :some folks say(regular voice)DELEETED!

strong bad jams a swiss cake roll in mega mans cpu drive
megaman halls down and disentegrates

s.b. hahahahah that one ever gets old


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part 3 coing soon!


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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,2 'sodes in one d
« Reply #5 on: June 04, 2004, 03:01:17 pm »

Weird yet good. If you at least tried to use correct grammer/spelling it would be better. Not to be offensive. Anyways funny stuff. I'm thinking of putting out some fun fanfics! Stay Tuned!
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,2 'sodes in one d
« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2004, 03:27:59 pm »

if i make a mistake in spelling sorry cuz my key board has two f's on it and one functions as an H key  and if you would like to guest star on one of the upcoming episodes (i'm not giving away any plot twists Wink )
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,2 'sodes in one d
« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2004, 07:07:26 pm »

well, its ok, but its kinda confusing with the grammar and spelling mistakes.  The episodes are... kinda weak plot -wise.  Just my opinions, not saying anything against you personally.  Keep it up.
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,2 'sodes in one d
« Reply #8 on: June 05, 2004, 02:54:13 am »

3 and three fourths:cyberspace(prt.3)

S.B. and H*R are walking in a vast wasteland, then in the distance they see a town,it has a sign that says "welcome to BHZ Forums".

S.B.:Whoa do you see that town homedork?

H*R:Yes I do.

S.b.: Maybe we can get help
there.


Suddenly, something runs toward them!

S.B.:What the crap is that ting!?

Gir:My name is Gir i'm a robot!

H*R:I dunno you kinda look like a mongoose dog.

Gir: Do you want some water?

S.B. drinks the water and quickly spits it out.

S.B.: Who put bacon in the water?!

Gir screams:I MADE IT MYSELF!!!

  S.B. hits his hand against his forehead and the group of four journey on to "BHZ Forums".

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part four coming soon!
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,cyber space prt.3
« Reply #9 on: June 05, 2004, 07:27:10 am »

I'm in it!
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,cyber space prt.3
« Reply #10 on: June 05, 2004, 09:06:00 am »

Hey am I writing better?
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Re: the adventure of HR and s.b.,cyber space prt.3
« Reply #11 on: June 05, 2004, 09:36:01 am »

3:cyberspace part

The group of five are continuing their journey to "BHZ Forums"S.B. decides they should rest at a cyber-hotel where they meet a new person who will help them on their quest.

S.B.:So you're saying there's a poral to Free Country,USA at BHZ Forums?

homsar15:yup

S.B.:And you're the only one who knows the secret password to get in?

homsar15:Yup, well half of it at least.

homestar: Well what about the other half?

gir:I know it!

Gir kicks the crud out of the regular homsar and homsar15 takes his place.

homsar15:Thank you gir.

S.B.:You two know eachother?

gir:Yes we are friends.

S.B.:Well I guess we could go now.

Scattered yeahs and sures are heard within the group and they journey onward.


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Re: the adventures of HR and s.b.,new 'sode just m
« Reply #12 on: June 05, 2004, 10:38:53 am »

I just started reading these and they are pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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« Reply #13 on: June 05, 2004, 11:33:12 am »

Good Jorb. Your grammer has improved! Yay!
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« Reply #14 on: June 05, 2004, 12:33:33 pm »

good.  grammars getting better.  plot is getting thicker.  Remember to keep it that way,  fhq said that if it does not have good spelling/grammar/punctuation, it could be locked.
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