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Topic: Adventures: reopened!!!! New episode: Gir the Mighty! (Read 1330 times)
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Kyler Daugherty
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these stories are going to be like a t.v. show with short episodes
1.billiondy buxx
H*R:hey stwon bah check out my new game!
s.b.:woah how did you afford this?
H*R: oh that cwedit cawd agency mailed me again and said i had a billliondymillion buxx!
S.b.:*chuckle* oh.....really *heh-heh*pfft
H*R:you should see somebody about that cough!
s.b.:whatever....
more episodes coming soon!
tell me if it was good or bad
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sorry for double posting...NEW episode!
2.mock-jail
sb walks by homestar is in an out door jail cell
s.b.:why are you in that box homestar you idiot
H*R:remember that video game i bought?
s.b.:yeah that was funny
H*R:what?
s.b.: oh ummm..... nothing
H*R: well the police came to my house and told me i used a hot check to buy it but if you ask me it didn't look good at all
s.b. hits his forehead and says:you're such an idiot
s.b.:see you loser man i'm gonna go burn something
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these are good man keep 'em coming 
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new episode
3 and one fourth:cyberspace
sb:gotta check my e-maill...
H*R: stwon bah check out this can of mewonade i found
homestar spills his can of melonade on s.b.'s computer
s.b.:you idiot look what you did!
H*R: whoah what's happening
homsar:I goot antz zen my tooth pastee!
s.b.:were getting sucked into cyberspace
H*R:and homsaw is coming with us!
s.b.:nooooooo not that guy!
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part 2 coming soon!
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new 'sode
3 and a half.cyberspace prt.2
s.b.:who's that guy he looks like 20x6
megaman.exe:who are you?
H*R:I'm the homstarrunner and some folks say i'm a-
s.b. mocking homestar :some folks say(regular voice)DELEETED!
strong bad jams a swiss cake roll in mega mans cpu drive megaman halls down and disentegrates
s.b. hahahahah that one ever gets old
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part 3 coing soon!
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schavira
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Weird yet good. If you at least tried to use correct grammer/spelling it would be better. Not to be offensive. Anyways funny stuff. I'm thinking of putting out some fun fanfics! Stay Tuned!
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Kyler Daugherty
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if i make a mistake in spelling sorry cuz my key board has two f's on it and one functions as an H key and if you would like to guest star on one of the upcoming episodes (i'm not giving away any plot twists  ) p.m. me
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well, its ok, but its kinda confusing with the grammar and spelling mistakes. The episodes are... kinda weak plot -wise. Just my opinions, not saying anything against you personally. Keep it up.
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3 and three fourths:cyberspace(prt.3)
S.B. and H*R are walking in a vast wasteland, then in the distance they see a town,it has a sign that says "welcome to BHZ Forums".
S.B.:Whoa do you see that town homedork?
H*R:Yes I do.
S.b.: Maybe we can get help there.
Suddenly, something runs toward them!
S.B.:What the crap is that ting!?
Gir:My name is Gir i'm a robot!
H*R:I dunno you kinda look like a mongoose dog.
Gir: Do you want some water?
S.B. drinks the water and quickly spits it out.
S.B.: Who put bacon in the water?!
Gir screams:I MADE IT MYSELF!!!
S.B. hits his hand against his forehead and the group of four journey on to "BHZ Forums".
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part four coming soon!
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I'm in it!
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Kyler Daugherty
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Hey am I writing better?
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3:cyberspace part
The group of five are continuing their journey to "BHZ Forums"S.B. decides they should rest at a cyber-hotel where they meet a new person who will help them on their quest.
S.B.:So you're saying there's a poral to Free Country,USA at BHZ Forums?
homsar15:yup
S.B.:And you're the only one who knows the secret password to get in?
homsar15:Yup, well half of it at least.
homestar: Well what about the other half?
gir:I know it!
Gir kicks the crud out of the regular homsar and homsar15 takes his place.
homsar15:Thank you gir.
S.B.:You two know eachother?
gir:Yes we are friends.
S.B.:Well I guess we could go now.
Scattered yeahs and sures are heard within the group and they journey onward.
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part 5 coming soon
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I just started reading these and they are pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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Good Jorb. Your grammer has improved! Yay!
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good. grammars getting better. plot is getting thicker. Remember to keep it that way, fhq said that if it does not have good spelling/grammar/punctuation, it could be locked.
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